What is love?
Love is fire in night sky
Redden gloominess with heats
Then explode happiness
What is love?
Love is diamonds on velvet
Highlight darkness with luxury
Then shine eternalness
What is love?
Love is charger of life
Encourage people with power
Then renew lives
What is love?
Love is water in desert
Moisturize sands with sacrificing
Then irrigate oasis
What is love?
Love is ornaments on Christmas trees
Decorate green with color
Then happy Christmas
I enjoyed reading this piece of literature.
ReplyDeleteI really like the first comparison" Love is fire in night sky", which sound exciting and that is love!!!
ReplyDeleteAccording to the poem that you wrote.I can see you are a very poetic girls.I enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem that to compare the love as encourage.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see your poem about love...it had some really effective comparisons. I think the Diamonds on Velvet line was very effective as an image. Continue to keep on top of editing mechanical and grammatical aspects in your writing to make us better comprehend your ideas.
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